This story is for everybody, but I had my friends at home, especially those who enjoy travelling, in mind while doing it.
I enjoyed the personal aspect of your story, it made it very clear who your audience was. It was clear to the reader that the story was about life in Denmark and Aarhus more specifically. The readers could get a good idea of how you were feeling and the experiences you have went through since arriving in Denmark.
I love that you can clearly see who the writer is because you have combined the situation in Denmark with your own story. You talk about your experience while also presenting data about the situation in Aarhus so we get both things at the same time: pictures that show the COVID situation but also pictures that show what activities you have been doing.
This story is for everybody, but I had my friends at home, especially those who enjoy travelling, in mind while doing it.
I enjoyed the personal aspect of your story, it made it very clear who your audience was. It was clear to the reader that the story was about life in Denmark and Aarhus more specifically. The readers could get a good idea of how you were feeling and the experiences you have went through since arriving in Denmark.
I love that you can clearly see who the writer is because you have combined the situation in Denmark with your own story. You talk about your experience while also presenting data about the situation in Aarhus so we get both things at the same time: pictures that show the COVID situation but also pictures that show what activities you have been doing.